Saturday, August 7, 2010

Touch

Friends
With magic of more
Undefined
Transfixed
Intermittent warm charge
Taps like a Morse code message
Makes contact
Skimming surface
Like a ladybug landing
On a silent lake
Surge of heat
Pools and throbs
Runs deep
To the center
Metamorphosis
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2 comments:

  1. MaddiAugust 9, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    I love this. You have a way of painting a strong mental image in my head, even with few words.

    "Like a ladybug landing on a silent lake"...that line made me smile for some reason. :)

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  2. Thelonious Punk(wizdumb)August 30, 2010 at 12:51 PM

    very good!

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